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The_wolf_with_the_red_roses 12:59 am UTC 02/23/14 |
I know Jim's a fan of country music, and had even name dropped Hank Williams as one of his favourites. Hank was less a song writer and more of a poet. With that in mind I'd thought I'd rip him off. Writing with the simple musical accompaniment Hank's song "Cold Cold Heart" in mind I came up with this. Work in progress, but any thoughts would be welcome. Below is a link To Hank's Cold Cold Heart as a point of reference. The Start Before I sleep and as I wake I only think of you The answer to my years of prayer And search for something new The ground before your feet is blessed Your smile lights up my heart But you tell me that you don't love me And have done from the start He'll never know how blessed he is To have you on his arm It seems to me that over night You've fallen for his charm All the while I long for you I make loneliness an art Your love is meant for someone else And has been from the start You've seen me at my very worst And still called me your friend But one thing that you can't do for me Is make this longing end You've taught me countless ways to fail In ways to win your heart But each new failure driver me on Then I plan back from the start I'd do anything to kiss your lips and hold your pretty hand But you're always reminding me of lines drawn in the sand Everyday I learn anew, that we're leagues apart But I'll keep waiting for your love And happiness to start | |
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