> You're good at this. :)
I have other ideas that would fit, in relation to the show as it stands (but it's not my book/show).
Like all good Bond villains, I think Falco needs a henchman (who gets killed by Strat), plus Falco and his 'army' need to be more menacing & violent. I was underwhelmed by the fight scenes. More swearing! More blood! More gore!
> It also helps build the world of the adults of Obsidian,
> because up until now all we've known of it is - Falco,
> Sloane, and non-speaking people who work for them.
> I mean, I assume that there's more adults than just them
> and that The Lost are a tiny minority... but there's
> nothing solid to back that up.
I agree. Some other character(s) to populate Obsidian. The Dr Loaf therapist character would work for a scene/song? Falco's henchman. An old rocker bartender (Steinman look-a-like) running The Dive, that has some comic dialogue, or a few lines in Deadringer 4 Love?
> BTW - were you near enough to the front to actually get
> hit by any "ribbons of blood" at the end of act one? :D
Yes, was row H in the stalls.
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