I have two lyrics that jump out as clunky or not up to typical steinman. They are 1) Or just a little cheaper than spit? and 2) Dancing like a cat on the stairs. 2) i understand it but am a dog guy!
I agree with those who say "open up the sky and let the planet that i love shine through" is great! I always viewed this song as being a recently deceased person singing to one they love who is still alive. In that case the planet is Earth!!!! like clawing your way out of heaven back to the one you love"
> Rare but they exist. I put forward "Open up the sky let
> the planet that I love shine through" mainly because it
> makes no sense to me. What planet? If you know, share?
> Also, what SteinLyric do you find clunky?