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RSG (mister_poet@hotmail.com) 07:46 am UTC 02/02/09 |
| THE DEVIL’S PLAYGROUND I will decorate this city With Ribbons Of Blood (Sensuous imagery. first thought, i feel this line is saying violence, slaughter) I will find the endless tears Soon to be a flood (Very Confusing for me personally. I simply don't grasp it. Too soon to be said, perhaps a line could be missing.) I will conjure up the magic Far beyond your sight I’ll illuminate this city With the ascension of the light (I feel the decoration of blood is beginning to feel less likely relating to violence, but perhaps something on a more spiritual nature. when hook is saying 'decorating' it makes me imagine warmth. this Godly magic is illuminating dark, violent times. alot like the atmosphere in the stimulating Streets Of Fire! Eternal terrors hold us down Keep us plodding in the mud (ain't that the truth!) I WILL DECORATE THIS CITY IN RIBBONS OF BLOOD. Broken hearts Are the Devil’s Playground Shattered dreams Disillusioned youth And all of man Is the Devil’s Playground Shameless lies And Shameful truth (Couldn't be said any better, this would be great for any Bat Out Of Hell / Peter Pan concept. We’ll all succumb! And some time when The Dark exults and moons arise In the blink of an eye The Devil’s Playground Is Born Again! The Devil’s Playground Is Alive Again! So Come On Down To the Devil’s Playground! Come On Down Before It Disappears In the blink of an eye You see the Devil’s playground Now it all seems dead But it used to be here…Once! (Once it was here) Once! Before it disappeared! Once! ‘Once’ always disappears (I'm not intelligent enough to reply to this, but I wanted to say you're a beautiful man) Trembling hands Are the Devil’s Playground Empty plans And hollow hopes ETERNAL TERRORS HOLD US DOWN AND WE’LL ALL BE DROWNING IN THE MUD! I will decorate this city With ribbons of blood……………… (the idea of blood is alot nicer than mud) In the blink of an eye All is lost The storms they rumble And the winds are tossed In the blink of an eye You’re a sad old man Trying to remember Whatever you can In the blink of an eye Death will clutch you No respect For fortune or Fame In the blink of an eye It all awaits you Thousand of tombstones Waiting for the names Just waiting for the names (Shiver.) In the blink of an eye…………… In the blink of an eye…………… In the blink of an ------- I I I I WILL DECORATE THIS CITY WITH RIBBONS OF BLOOD! (soft) No matter How tragic the loss No matter How heavy the cost To this very day I can stand tall and say: I fought for Paradise But Paradise lost I fought for Paradise And Paradise lost. It wasn’t your fault or mine Wasn’t this it wasn’t that But Paradise lost In the final at bat Paradise lost In the last at bat. (DARK.) == I had to say something. However you influence my heart & fills it with joy. For just the sake of saying it Jimmy you're a real special guy. Your charm is Spiritually Infinite! Please consider writing some poetry for as you already know you're style is out of this world. == | |
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