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The_wolf_with_the_red_roses 04:27 pm UTC 11/21/07 |
| In reply to: | Until You Feel The Hook - Willis 02:17 am UTC 11/21/07 |
| Dude. This rocks, you should really write some music to this and send me the finished project Id love to hear it > Been a while since I've made a lengthy post of sorts. > > I often spend my time writing songs. Most become some > hybrid of Stephen Jenkins and Justin Currie sounding > tunes. > > Almost a year ago, starting as a fun exercise, I decided > to write a tune in the vein of Steinman. Not trying to > mimic something he's written, but more inspired by. After > Jim shared a potential song for The Music Cycle, and since > Scaramouche and few others share their words, why not > throw my hat in. Comments and suggestions are always > welcome. > > The setting: A Streets of Fire-esque city. Wendy, the > lonely girl, still a little bright eyed. Hook, envision a > dastardly pimp, running the underbelly, ruling the night. > > This was the first time writing a duet, or anything like > this for that matter. > > The song starts with a female vocal. To cut down on some > length I put a "/" in front of the parts sung by a male. > > Until you feel the hook > > I run. When I feel your icy hands around my neck, I run > Run, I run. When I feel your steely stare, it’s just > piercing through me now > > Am I the only one alone tonight? > I know you’re calling for me, but there’s really no one > else to pick up, anyways > Am I the only one who won’t give up my tears? > That’s what you came here for. And I’ve known about your > ones before me > > You called for me > I’ve never felt never this much before in my life > Then you came for me > I thought my brothers and sisters weren’t enough > And I followed you > Never came much quicker than I’d ever planned > > Run, I run. When I feel that icy collar clamping tight > around, I run > Run. /She’ll run. When she feels my sword pressing up > behind her now > /She’ll cry, scream, and scurry. Like the ones I had > before her > /It’s music to me, plus it’s fun for the crew > /I called for you, and I came for you > /To make you feel the Hook > /You will feel the Hook > > /Run, she’ll run. And he’ll come soon > /Damned little boy. To set right my bads > /My list of faults are endless by now. > Remember my love > /Not all boys are lost > /Not all men get theirs > /And the girls stay lonely > /And the heavens don’t care > > /Now why don’t you step into my world? > /And learn to love the Hook > /And love to feel my wrath > /It’s burning up inside you now > /And live to please the Hook > /And embrace all this never. > /And learn to know your place > /I came for you. That’s what I do. > /Scare the boys and whisper to you > /Till the demon opens his jaws, listen > /Hear the big tick-tock > /The time has passed > /And it’s only a matter of now > > > /And learn to need the Hook > /And all your girls will take a bow > /Well, you wouldn’t know right now > /But I’m sure to show you how > /Wait until you feel the Hook > /Until you feel the Hook > > /Will that boy come for you? > /Will he come packing? > /Will I be dancing that plank to meet my friend, fate? > /remember my words, you know them as true > /Not all boys are lost > (you called for me) > /Not all men get theirs > (you came for me) > /And the girls stay lonely > (I followed you) > /And Heaven still doesn’t care > > /And Run > I run. When I see what you’re up to tonight, run > I run. My window was open and you crawled inside it > Am I fair game? Are you making me your prey? > Praying for the first time in my life > /Until you feel the Hook > Am I the only one alone tonight? > /You will feel the Hook > I’ll be the only one to never give tears to you > Praying for a better boy tonight, to put an end to you > > /Run, Wendy, Run. I’ll be coming soon > > > | |
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